Hey what's up? It's time for a Thursday Thrills, where authors post a snippet based on a picture provided betwen 100 - 1k words. Oh yeah, it's February 14th, and Happy Valentine's Day.
Here in this segment. I'm going to post a scene based off my two favorite characters - Darla & Tyler.
“Hey sweetie,” Darla looked around at the mess. “What’s with
all the boxes of pizza.”
“The guys and I were hungry; they brought over pizza.”
“I thought we were going to have a movie night alone.”
“They brought pizza.” Tyler
spoke hesitantly.
“Oh, well it’s too bad. I was going to show you what I
bought.” She looked on the TV screen, and noticed a man on the floor, with what
appears to be chocolate or cigars in his mouth. Whatever it was, it drew her
close to the set. “What are you
watching, CSI?”
“No, it’s a movie we just put on.” Tyler responded.
“Shh!” Jiro responded. “Quiet, I’m trying to hear.”
“Oh man, I’d never thought it would’ve been her.” Sully
commented.
“Yeah, that sucks. So what now?” Tyler asked.
“Do you want us to leave? Your woman is home.” Jiro asked.
“No, you’re fine. We have this other movie to watch. I’ve
never seen it.”
“Well, put it on then.” Sully opened the box of pizza and
pulled out two more slices. “Hey would you mind if I used your microwave?”
“You don’t have to ask; just go ahead.” Tyler waved it off.
Sully rose from the sofa and carried two slices over to the
kitchen, but he never expected Darla to enter the living room, wearing
something shocking, but wow!
“Um… Tyler ,
you sure you don’t want us to leave?”
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Really well written Thrill Ray. Love the way Darla convinces her man it may be better to get rid of his friends
ReplyDeleteHeh, lookie what I bought. I've done that, but never with the neighbours/friends. LOL
ReplyDeleteGreat writing from the photo. I hope Tyler woke up to his senses and kicked his friends out.
ReplyDeleteBravo! I"ve got to know what happened next! Way to tease, Ray!
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