Saturday, February 22, 2014

Saturday's AfterDark Moments - 02/22/2014: Noctura's Victims.


Hey guys, what's up? It's time for another segment of Saturday's AfterDark Moments, where authors write an erotic snippet anywhere between 100 - 500 words, provided with an inspired erotic picture.

Today, I'm going to introduce a character I once wrote about in the 1990s - Noctura.
Noctura is a vampire that originated during the Roman Empire, when she was banished from her mother Lillith. I wrote a story, which I never finished in 1997, called "The Final Bloodline", it's not the official, but it's related to the story. Now, I haven't really decided where I want to organize it, but I'm willing to give it a shot on where the story should go. However, these snippets do help. Enjoy the show.


“Mirror, mirror, who’s the fairest of them all?” Noctura asked as she stared at her reflection. She then checked herself, taking appreciation of her luscious beauty; a silk black lingerie and a dark see-through bra that had bowtie patterns that covered her nipples. Deep inside, she felt sexy – and horny.

She turned away and stepped out of the bathroom, where she had two men. One man was laying on the bed, wearing nothing but a pair of silk boxers. He was a gorgeous-looking man, fresh of a men’s magazine cover; blonde hair, green eyes, and a body build that’ll have women melting for him. He was a hunk. She turned to her side and saw a young, lanky man sitting in the chair, with a ball gag in his mouth and his hands well-tied behind his back.

She leaned down and whispered in his ear, “I’m gonna make you enjoy the show, and when I’m done with him, you’ll be all mine.” She landed a soft kiss on the man’s cheek, while the man struggled to say something, but he couldn’t since was gagged.

She undid her silk negligee and dropped it to the floor. The man with the blonde hair rose from the bed and walked toward her.

“You look so beautiful.” He kissed her and growled, “I’m going to make you mine tonight.”

“Me too; you’re on my menu tonight.” She grinned wickedly.

Noctura felt his kisses; they were demanding and lusting. She wrapped her arms around his body and sunk her kisses further in his mouth. The two groped affectionately, until she pushed him on the bed, quickly pulling aside her black thong. She climbed on top of him, facing her tied victim, and straddled her legs over his as she guided his shaft inside her clean shaven pussy.

Noctura rolled her hips on this man. She rolled her eyes away as she gasped and moaned to the pleasures this man was giving her. She rocked him so hard, the man was panting as he gripped her thighs. Then, there was a guttural sound coming from the blonde hair man. It was the kind of sound that indicated his climax. She noticed the retorted look on his face, while she too felt a sudden feeling rising inside her.

“Noctura, babe, slow down. I’m gonna cum!”

She cried in ecstasy, “Oh me too! Cum for me, please… oh god!”

She quickly cried out in climax, and felt her man pulsate inside her. The pleasure was so immense. She felt her fangs grow, and she turned her blonde haired victim’s head to the side while sinking her teeth in. The blonde haired man quickly shook to the sudden shock of his mortality. She felt his hand grab Noctura by her shoulder, while she drained his life away. And in that instant, she felt his strength fading away, until it collapsed on the bed.

She looked up and watched the mortified expression on the tied victims face. His eyes were widened over what he witness. He struggled to break free, but he couldn’t. She grinned, wiping her mouth with her hand as she climbed off him, giggling maniacally when she approached her tied victim.

“Don’t worry, I already had my fill for dinner. You’ll be my breakfast when you wake up.”



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4 comments:

  1. Great sentence: [shook to the sudden shock of his mortality.] Do complete this story, Ray. Very nice.

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  2. I like her Noctura what great persona... well written, sexy, scary, and final in its execution... ( andy hers ) lol hugs well done T

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  3. Fantastic piece of writing Ray. Dark, sexy and as hot as hell. Would love to read more of this

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